Looks good to me now.

By the way folks, 3-phase service to commercial premises follows the same basic arrangements as for 1-phase residential.

Obviously the meter is 3-ph and there are 3 main service fuses. A main 3-ph GFI can be found, although for large installations it's more likely there will be two or more "main" GFIs to avoid the whole lt going off if one trips.

The only other major difference for 3-ph is that the main switches and/or main GFIs are 3-pole and do not break the neutral.